"I kinda like you quiet" Fucking Savage m8
Haha I was losing it at the house part, and the guy's reaction was perfect man. Keep up the good work mang :D
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Haha, that left swipe caught me off guard. Good stuff man!
thanks my dude!
haha, the computer struggle is real
good work man!
Buen trabajo! :D
Not bad man, love the pun humor haha
Man that face is gross haha
Man that's some bad luck haha
Good luck with the film festival :D
hahaha thanks! :)
This is pretty good for your first animation but theres two things you could do too make your animation insanely better. I would work on how your characters face the audience. You always have a full frontal position for your characters and I would add more poses where they're 3/4s position or even profile. Like when two characters are on screen speaking to each other you should turn their bodies inward.
The second thing that I would work on is movement. Your characters tend to be pretty stiff and too contained. By the looks of it most/possibly all of your stuff is tweened when it moves. I would try hand drawing more major movements but you can keep tweening on minor movements. Like when the girl was drawing in the classroom that was a pretty good use of tweening since it was a really minor movement.
Overall I do like the animation and other than the things I mentioned here its great stuff! I hope to see more of your stuff around here :D
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