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haha, the computer struggle is real

good work man!

Armadill0h responds:

Thanks! :D

Buen trabajo! :D

Man that face is gross haha

Man that's some bad luck haha

Good luck with the film festival :D

Jackie3188 responds:

hahaha thanks! :)

This is pretty good for your first animation but theres two things you could do too make your animation insanely better. I would work on how your characters face the audience. You always have a full frontal position for your characters and I would add more poses where they're 3/4s position or even profile. Like when two characters are on screen speaking to each other you should turn their bodies inward.

The second thing that I would work on is movement. Your characters tend to be pretty stiff and too contained. By the looks of it most/possibly all of your stuff is tweened when it moves. I would try hand drawing more major movements but you can keep tweening on minor movements. Like when the girl was drawing in the classroom that was a pretty good use of tweening since it was a really minor movement.

Overall I do like the animation and other than the things I mentioned here its great stuff! I hope to see more of your stuff around here :D

Good stuff man! I haven't seen anyone do a series on being henchman before so its cool to see something new.

Lexington96 responds:

Thank you SOOO MUCH!!!! That means a lot.

This is pretty good for a stop motion, if this is your first kudos to you. Only advice I would give you is to animate the mouths of the characters, have more poses with the figures to make the animation smoother, and maybe try make some visual effects in programs like after effects (or something like that.)

gokuss4z responds:

Thanks for the review!! : )

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